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Article for 50 year old reputable Educational Institution declined by you because it sounds like an AdvertisementHi Kashmorwiki. Recently I submitted an article for Wikipedia on the D.A.V. group of Schools in Chennai in India which happens to be one of Chennai’s most reputed group of schools that began way back in 1970. Currently there are over 16,000 students enrolled across 10 of their owned schools and I do feel they merit an article in Wikipedia. Before writing the concerned article, an in-depth research was done to analyze and understand how articles regarding educational institutions were written on Wikipedia with an aim to maintain a standard presentation format. Almost all such articles seem to adhere to the following style. Introduction to the Educational Institution History and Founders Branches and other Academic Associations Campus facilities/infrastructure Notable Alumni Other Initiatives References Based on this, the article for D.A.V Schools was written with nothing extra added to the structure of the article. All guidelines issued by Wikipedia regarding writing articles were followed strictly including citing reliable sources for almost every fact presented in the article. However the article submission was declined by you and Steve M on the grounds that it sounded like an advertisement. I have provided below a list of some links to articles available on Wikipedia on educational institutions. To make the listing global I have included links to both schools and colleges spread across three countries i.e. USA, England and India. A casual perusal of these links will allow one to conclude that my article is similar in structure to the others. Therefore I am at a loss to understand why this article on D.A.V. was rejected. I request the concerned editors, you and Steve M to kindly share the specific lines / sections that are a concern in comparison to all the other Wikipedia articles on Education Institutions so that I can carry out the necessary changes and have the submission accepted. Thank you! Best Schools - India
Best Colleges – India
Best Schools – USA
Best Colleges – USA
Best Schools – England
Best Colleges – England
The submission that was declined: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Draft:D.A.V._Group_of_Schools,_Chennai
Draft:Ramesh_Singh_PalDear reviewer yesterday you have declined the wikipedia draft https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Draft:Ramesh_Singh_Pal with no comments simply putting that this submission's references do not qualifies for a Wikipedia article. I can give you the atleat 100 of examples of Wikipedia biography article where only external link has been provided they do not show significant coverage. You may ask to incorporate the more references but declining the page is totally disappointing. It shows that Wikipedia is not playing a fare game. Dr Ramesh singh Pal is a notable personality, you have to cheek the his contribution. Kindly reconsider it. Hello Sanatan pragya. There are like millions of unreferenced/unreliably sourced articles present in the English wiki about different persons. If you think they are not notable, you may nominate it for deletion. As an AFC reviwer, I cannot accept an article about a non notable person because of this reason you said. For a person to have an article of their own, they should have significant coverage from multiple independent reliable sources. In the case of this person, he does not have. So I declined it. I hope you got the point. If you think wikipedia is not a fair game, kindly tell your concerns on the teahouse. Please let me know if you have any concerns. Regards. Kichu🐘 Need any help? 05:26, 20 April 2021 (UTC) You've got mail It may take a few minutes from the time the email is sent for it to show up in your inbox. You can at any time by removing the {{You've got mail}} or {{ygm}} template. Raja (Rajendra nath) (talk) 10:58, 20 April 2021 (UTC) Request for review Draft:Maharani Jaiwanta Bai Hey (Namaste) brother Kuchi, I wanted to request you to review my draft Draft:Maharani Jaiwanta Bai.The draft is about great warrior Mahrana Pratap's mother and 15th century mewar's king Rana Udai Singh II's wife. Buddy do review this Draft is still pending since 1 month. If anything i had to change then talk to me. Thanks Buddy ☺️, Rajendra nath Raja (Rajendra nath) (talk) 11:03, 20 April 2021 (UTC) Hello Rawalrajendranath, your article seems like really a good. But let me go through the sources first since those are not online ones. I will get back to you soon. Regards. Kichu🐘 Need any help? 12:55, 20 April 2021 (UTC) Thank you buddy kichu, Notify me if you wanted to change something or moved it to article. Thanks, once again for helping me. Rawalrajendranath (talk) 13:15, 20 April 2021 (UTC) Pontian Eagles DraftHello Kichu, I understand the need for meeting strict criteria in order to publish and spread information on Wiki. However, the page I have created has been rejected on account of it being semi-professional, when it remains 1 of 2 teams from it’s competition without a Wiki page. I have reviewed the pages of not only those in the same competition, but of those higher on the national league pyramid. The content I have put together is correctly referenced and cites reputable publishers, both of which are absent for the pages of clubs playing in the same competition presently on Wikipedia. I kindly ask for this page to be reconsidered for publishing. If there is anything I can do to help increase the chance of this, please let me know. Thank you. Kind regards, Pontos92
I have sent you a note about a page you reviewedHello, Kashmorwiki Thank you for creating Jagadish Debbarma. User:Robert McClenon, while examining this page as a part of our page curation process, had the following comments:
To reply, leave a comment here and begin it with (Message delivered via the Page Curation tool, on behalf of the reviewer.) Robert McClenon (talk) 17:03, 20 April 2021 (UTC) Proposed deletion of Jagadish Debbarma  The article Jagadish Debbarma has been proposed for deletion because of the following concern:
While all constructive contributions to Wikipedia are appreciated, pages may be deleted for any of several reasons. You may prevent the proposed deletion by removing the Please consider improving the page to address the issues raised. Removing
Nomination of Jagadish Debbarma for deletion  The article will be discussed at Wikipedia:Articles for deletion/Jagadish Debbarma until a consensus is reached, and anyone, including you, is welcome to contribute to the discussion. The nomination will explain the policies and guidelines which are of concern. The discussion focuses on high-quality evidence and our policies and guidelines. Users may edit the article during the discussion, including to improve the article to address concerns raised in the discussion. However, do not remove the article-for-deletion notice from the top of the article. Robert McClenon (talk) 00:39, 21 April 2021 (UTC) Hello: The Wiki page has been rejected again on the grounds that only minor improvements have been made and that it is encyclopedic. I have some serious concerns about this process. First of all, there have been extensive changes from the last version to now. But, it still says that it is only minor. Secondly, I would be happy to bring to your attention 10s of other Wiki pages of scientists, whose stature is similar or lower, but with Wiki pages that fit the so-called encyclopedic description. In fact, my original submission was precisely modeled after two scientists' wiki page whose accomplishments are very similar. So, it begs the question. Is this an implicitly biased evaluation? This has taken too long. Please let me know of next steps in order for me publish the page ASAP. Thanks
Draft:YSN Fab declineHello sir, can you be speicifc about the sources your found unreliable on the YSN Fab draft?
Recent Denial of Draft: DocusearchKashmorwiki, You recently declined my draft submission: Docusearch (https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Draft:Docusearch) with the comment: "This submission appears to read more like an advertisement than an entry in an encyclopedia." I spent many hours ensuring this article was written from a factual, neutral point of view. Would you kindly which article sentence or comment you consider to be biased or advertisement? I have tried to comply with all the conditions found on the AfC Help Desk. Your further assistance would be appreciated.Wiki Arcanum (talk) 18:05, 16 April 2021 (UTC) Hello Wiki Arcanum, when you submit a draft about a company, please do not write the draft from the viewpoint of a company. For example, the draft contains phrases like Docusearch continues to test the limits of federal privacy laws which might give a bad impression to the reviewers. But your draft is actually a promising one. It only needs some slight changes in its tone. Please remodify with little bit of changes and your article may get accepted. Please let me know if you have any concerns. Good luck with your work and regards. Kichu🐘 Need any help? 18:15, 16 April 2021 (UTC) Kichu, Thank you for your recent advice on improving this article for acceptance into Wikipedia as well as your encouragement. I have removed the questionable comments and included additional tweaks. I ask that you re-review for consideration and would appreciate further advise. Wiki Arcanum (talk) 16:01, 21 April 2021 (UTC) You've got mailIt may take a few minutes from the time the email is sent for it to show up in your inbox. You can at any time by removing the {{You've got mail}} or {{ygm}} template. Mattyazz (talk) 21:02, 21 April 2021 (UTC) Hello Mattyazz. Got your mail. Please make necessary changes in your draft, the same you said in the message. I have nothing more to add and you may remind me when its ready. By the way, you said in your mail something like Me and my coworkers are working on it. Is it like that you guys are getting paid for this? If so please disclose it. Regards Kichu🐘 Need any help? 06:02, 22 April 2021 (UTC) Discussion about deletion of page Deepak RawatAbout deletion process of page- Deepak Rawat --Why isn't there notability, If many official governmental websites references are available for that matter. Also a lot of reliable newspaper sources are available. There are lots if discussion about the person. Lots of notability, anyone could find, but why is it under deletion process. Can't you find reliable sources for it. Or you just want to marking assessment for my work on article and put it into dustbin (I mean under deletion process). Aj Ajay Mehta 007 (talk) 05:18, 22 April 2021 (UTC)
User:Kashmorwiki🐘 Dear Kichu,....^^^Significant coverage🙄😲.Point(1)--Isn't enough of these 30+ sources and references.Even pages like(I am giving one of example, there are many-many) Ashok Khemka has only 13 references. Point(2)---Even now after your reply on that deletion page, I have added too many sources and references to that article that is directly turn around the topic of article i.e.Deepak Rawat. The whole news article of those newly added (even some of old) references are about this article i.e. Deepak Rawat. It is a significant coverage. As you mention GNG...What GNG says is that---{{{{"Significant coverage" addresses the topic directly and in detail, so that no original research is needed to extract the content. ##Here read this specifically---?But it does not need to be the main topic of the source material.?}}}}}}}
Draft:Project A (venture capital)Hello Kashmorwiki. I have revised the article again and hope that it now also delivers the right context. Wish you a great day! Greeting from Germany to India. --HudsonGlory (talk) 08:43, 22 April 2021 (UTC)
Found a reputable source for Azra Public SchoolHey. last time when I messaged you, you rejected my page Azra Public School, Hyderabad because of the lack of reliable sources. I did quite a bit of digging and found the December 22, 1996, Publication of Newstime (part of TOI Group) which talked about the school. (Image) HelloRasalghul1711, sorry for the late reply. I am so busy in real life and only came back for responding to a situation which needed my attention. I think its better if you contact any other reviewers if you need faster response. Im really sorry that I cant help you at the moment. Regards Kichu🐘 Need any help? 16:00, 17 April 2021 (UTC)
Hey kashmorwiki could you check it now. Rasalghul1711 (talk) 07:17, 21 April 2021 (UTC) Hello Rasalghul1711. Let me ask about the reliablity of the photograph you showed me to someone. Im not sure about it. Kichu🐘 Need any help? 07:26, 21 April 2021 (UTC)
Thank you It was first time I had expanded any article so was excited about my work going to mainspace. Thank you for accepting the article.
Citations & References as to Wikipedia Policy in Vikas RawatI believe that all the citations & references added in the page are to the point and exactly verifiable. Though the citations are comparatively less but as in accordance to Wikipedia policy I believe that it is not mandatory to have many citations and references if there are few and authentic then they are worthy to be there. It is similar to many other articles on the Wikipedia space which have very less citations and references but they are still present there. Still, I would request you to assist me on how to add more as there are many references available but they don't exactly fit to the Wikipedia guidelines therefore, only those which abide by those guidelines are mentioned. Hello Ritwik909190, can I know about which article are you talking about? Kichu🐘 Need any help? 08:48, 24 April 2021 (UTC) Hi Kichu, there was recently a major deletion at this article that I restored because it appears the content is generally supported by reliable sources and both the sections and individual contents are tagged with citation needed templates. I am going to be off-wiki for a bit, so I am wondering if you can monitor this article and/or add more sources in the meantime. Thank you, Beccaynr (talk) 13:58, 24 April 2021 (UTC)
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Requesting for article approvalPlease 🙏 help in getting Amir Ali Shaik article live
Bhaskar Jyoti NathGood afternoon ! May I kindly know why my article is being declined while there are so many article on person with lesser notability than my subject has been accepted in Assamese writers List . How shoould I proceeed please suggest since I know my subject is notable person in the concern area and qualifies better than many in Assamese writers list — Preceding unsigned comment added by Latumoni20 (talk • contribs) 10:50, 25 April 2021 (UTC) Hello Latumoni20, the sources in your draft are not enough to establish GNG. They are not giving enough significant coverage to the person. Please see WP:GNG. And my duty is to check whether the drafts submitted are fit for moving into the mainspace. Like you said, plenty of articles about non notable persons exist in this encyclopedia and thats why we have a system called AFD. If you think any one the articles are not satisying GNG, you may nominate it for deletion. Thats the proper way. Just because some bad articles exist here does not mean that we should not accept anything like that. I hope you understood the point. Try to add some better sources into the draft and expand it little more. Please let me know if you have any concerns. Regards Kichu🐘 Need any help? 12:34, 25 April 2021 (UTC) REQUEST FOR ARTICLE APPROVALRequesting dear editor to accept Amir Ali Shaik article as going forward it will get improved — Preceding unsigned comment added by 124.123.80.139 (talk) 06:25, 25 April 2021 (UTC) Hello, 124.123.80.139, no improvements have been made since the last decline. So I cannot accept it. Please make the required changes and let me know. Regards Kichu🐘 Need any help? 06:16, 26 April 2021 (UTC) |
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